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Post by raynebolt on Mar 27, 2014 20:50:17 GMT
-General Stuff- Name: Rayne Bolt Nicknames: Arby Race: Pegasus Gender: Male Age: 18 Other: Just moved to the area -Physical Stuff- Coat Color: Brown Mane Color and Style: Short brown and white in an alternating pattern. Eye Color: Purple Cutie Mark: Cloud with lightning bolt Other: N/A Physical build: Average and lanky -Social Stuff- Current Home: Cloudsdale Job: Weather intern Mother: Whisper Wind Father: Thunder Storm Sibling(s): Drizzle Rayne Other Family:N/A Closest Friends:N/A Dating:N/A Mate:N/A Foal(s):N/A -Personality Stuff- Likes: Flying Sports Weather and Danger Dislikes: Quietness Waiting Boredom Motivation: Wants to become a ThunderBolt Strengths:Flying and physical activities Weaknesses: being patient too competitive Fears: Drowning/can't swim Overall Persona: Rayne finds it hard to make friends. This is because is is overly competitive he turns everything into a competition. He loves extreme sports. He loves music especially rock. Rayne likes the type of girl that lives to have fun. Although he isn't super smart he has an average sense of intelligence. Background Information Rayne has just moved to the area. His father was moved because he received a better job. He is very competitive though he is also the perfect example of determination. Once he has his sights set on something he refuses to give up.
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Post by Alaska on Mar 27, 2014 21:52:28 GMT
Hmm...I think you need a bit more with the Overall Persona section. All we know about Rayne's personality is that he's competitive and we can assume he isn't at all docile. Change this, and I think this pony will be a good character. ;D
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Post by raynebolt on Mar 28, 2014 0:45:28 GMT
Edited
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Post by Alaska on Mar 28, 2014 18:25:06 GMT
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